Blue Denim Shorts

Hey there, bloggers. I just thought I'd ask for your advice, if any of you are reading this. 

I have to write a poem about shorts using sensory details. Not to be confused with a short poem. Quite literally, I mean shorts. Here's what I have thus far, and just wanted to get some opinions. haha Mind you, this isn't particularly a serious poem. Also, I suck at writing poetry. 

On the first day of Spring, 

I wore my blue denim shorts.

They smelled like fresh flowers in the field,

they were soft and hugged my legs as I walked,

and the newly found spring breeze lightly brushed against me.

The sun seemed to shine a little brighter when I wore my blue denim shorts,

and the air a little fresher.

I love my blue denim shorts.

So that's it! Please feel free to give me your comments. Thanks!